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Author Topic: Advanced Critique Needed on Non-Furry Novel  (Read 1085 times)
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« on: December 05, 2010, 01:50:42 AM »

Feel free to move/delete/lock this if it's too off-topic, but I'm kind of hard up for help.

I completed NaNoWriMo a week ago, and I ended up with a book that was a good bit better than I'd expected (I had fully expected 100 pages of crap).

I think this can be developed into a publishable book, but I desperately need advanced critique for the whole manuscript.

Some things I am looking for include:
*What could be made longer or developed more?
*What could be cut from the story?
*Where have I used telling versus showing?
*What else could be done to improve the story as a whole?

Because it is non-furry (and I plan to publish the final draft) I won't post it here; you will have to contact me by PM or at threetails (AT) gmail (DOT) com for a copy in your choice of formats (.doc, .rtf, or .pdf).
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