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Author Topic: Requesting a Critique after dusting off  (Read 995 times)
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« on: October 20, 2012, 06:43:54 PM »

Hey! It's been a while since I've posted new chapters of my series "Beer, Wine, And Spirits." I edited as best I can but I feel like I'm missing something.

Linkage: http://www.furrag.com/viewstory.php?sid=1075&chapid=3732

Thanks in advance!
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